This took me a while to get who it was. I think you did an excellent job creating the pony, and I also think that you could've made a little more of an identifier for it. The low rating is because many people that I watch adore MLP, FiM, and I have seen similar things repeatedly. However, I think that you should try to incorporate more things that will show that this is Maplehoof and not some random OC pony.
The hair seems a bit cracked, so maybe try to use wet or clay that is still in the plastic stage so it can be smooth. Either that or try to smooth it by rubbing the rough areas with your fingers until they smooth out.
Also, although I am not a fan of MLP FiM, I am tolerant and beleive that it does have good humor, thoughit lacks in the more intellectual areas that I prefer, including more difficult plot lines. (FYI)
The hair seems a bit cracked, so maybe try to use wet or clay that is still in the plastic stage so it can be smooth. Either that or try to smooth it by rubbing the rough areas with your fingers until they smooth out.
Also, although I am not a fan of MLP FiM, I am tolerant and beleive that it does have good humor, thoughit lacks in the more intellectual areas that I prefer, including more difficult plot lines. (FYI)
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